All Comments on 'College Ch. 12'

I love the way you describe the sexual tension and then the sexual interaction between you and your lover. The lack of intimate detail is actually a plus in your writing as it allows the imagination to fill in the various erotic vagaries. Keep up the fine work. I look forward to reading each of your submissions. Thanks for sharing. While I think of it, an editor would help with consistency of tense, if you're of a mind to improve an already fine product. T

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Please add more soon!