All Comments on 'College Days Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow!!

Had to wait a while for that but was well worth it!! Please be quick with the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent storytelling!

An excellent story! I just read the first three chapters in one setting, and it really gives the feeling of love and affection. It's far more believable than many similar stories, and I feel far more attached to the characters for it. Great job! Definately Caffenated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Finally!

It took awhile to get here, but it was definately WELL WORTH THE WAIT!

I hope the next chapter gets here very soon......and the next, and the next, and....

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A Beautiful Story !

This was indeed a beautiful story. One can feel the love all during the entire length, especially the last chapter. Please keep them coming..I have enough tears to last for quite some time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More...!

Brilliantly sweet. More!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Story

I sincerely hope that you will write more to this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I must Agree

I've never read stories as good as yours. You must give fans what they want. MUST.....HAVE....MORE!!!!!!!!

Mr Wild willyMr Wild willyover 17 years ago
Absolutely a Winner!!!

What a great series! I wish I could have given it a 10. The naivety in his first time was so well done, I thought of my first time, fumbling and all the feelings of inadequacy, dry mouth, ecitement. Oh, to live that over again--Wonderful. NOW, quit reading this diatribe and get writing more of this wonderful story. Your fans AWAIT!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Best story ever.

Wonderfully writen. I felt i was Mark myself. All the details and small things.. it is all there. Please, keep it up. I can't wait to see what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More please!!!

This is an amazing story and I look forward for more chapters, please!

Great Work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Yes!

Congratulations on being an honest writer . Either you are describing a personal truelife experience or you are extremely talented . Well done .

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
loved it

very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Another great chapter, but...

The global warming crap I can do without. Why would you knowingly piss of people with a different opinion? BTW, Yahoo just listed 6 prominent scientists that changed their mind on the matter, now saying that it's a fact that global warming is a real threat to the world. This really isn't the place for right wing politics. It just sowers the experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
If this is the wrong place...

for right wing politics, why continue it. The best way to put a stop to it is to ignore it. You'll notice that of all the comments (and there are a lot of them) yours is the only one to take offence to it. Personally, I didn't come here to argue politics but the comment by the author was pertinant to the story (her course of study). The story is well written, erotic, sexy, loving and funny. I liked it and plan on continuing reading the rest of the series. Ron

pourtypourtyover 13 years agoAuthor
Politics?

LOL!

To those who believe in man-made Global Warming, that it will mean the end for our planet, and are offended that I made a single minor comment about it in a FICTIONAL story: PLEASE STOP READING! I wouldn't want anyone to be offended while reading a FREE story about DEVIANT SEX! By all means, please go read a story that doesn't offend you!

Wait until chapter 9 when we find out:

* Tammy is actually a Tea Party Patriot and has an ongoing affair with Glen Beck;

* Mark joins the National Socialist Party, which he finds out is populated entirely by hot female Nazi's;

* Collette converts to Islam and wages a personal Jihad against college administrators;

* And Jen becomes a smokin' hot meterologist on CNN, converts to a Global Warming alarmist and gets naked on set each day to raise awareness!!!

(Just kidding, but I'm tempted at this point!)

LUSTYWHEELSLUSTYWHEELSabout 13 years ago

I love your comment pourty yer awesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
bad on you pourty

it's a real shame you let your EGO get the best of you no writer should ever bitch at the readers it shows how immature you are. get smart and accept the fact not everyone will like your stories or every part of them or stop writing. your tirade makes you sound like a ten year old bad comments are a part of writing live with it or stop posting your stories and keep them for yourself atleast then you will know everyone (you) will like them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
too funny

your scolding a person over the net having fun and making comments about something stupid. Good job on the story and u got some haters droppin bombs, lmao

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Man your stories are all good. Don't listen to all the haters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
For the sake of your future sexy stories

Learn what a vagina ACTUALLY is so you don't write descriptions of physically impossible actions between the lovers. Vulva is a correct term the female external genitals while a vagina is an internal passageway which opens into the vulva.

Keep it simple and just write pussy when you mean pussy. By trying to get all anatomical and being wrong, you just disrupt the mood you're trying to describe. Thanks for the story. It's a bit of a slow starter but I like the characters so I'll keep reading.

coochiebarbercoochiebarberalmost 11 years ago

two desperate sisters in the race who gets to fuck the inexperienced and confused brother.. jen got way ahead of her sister to seduce the hungry and horny teenage brother.... quiet a story so far.. gotta read on to see what happens to other sister and see if this turns out to be threesome.. or ever turns in to jealousy

brirob51brirob51about 6 years ago

The love and tenderness that Jen shows to Marc is true romance, and very touching.I can't wait to read the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
global warming

You lost me when you mentioned global warming.

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