All Comments on 'College Days Ch. 09'

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one.

If i could give you more than 5 stars i would. The whole story from 1-9 was absolutely great. I hope the next chapter can come a little quicker. Please keep writing on this .Thanks for a very very good story.

It's been awhile since I read the previous chapters but I didn't have to review them before reading this latest chapter. Great character development and one terrific story. Please don't let my total recall stand in the way of completing additional chapters at a faster pace. Much thanks for this beautiful story.

Great job with this I'm glad I found it again. I'm hoping that once they make love as a threesome Colette will lose any lingering jealousies. Love should be shared they are all intimate so as a group I hope they will find a new level to there relationships. Good character development in the entire story. Also I'm glad you finally addressed the whole jealousy issue stemming from when Mark was told to feel free to find a girlfriend or lover. But then Colette was freaking because he had group sex with Jennifer on her birthday when he had express permission to be with her. Also for a relationship to last wont Mark need more experiences out side of his sisters before settling down? He is so much younger than them. Can't wait for the next one

Lustywheels...have expressed my sentiments exactly....Must hope for a quicker chapter addition . Lets see if Collete who has a lot sexual ideas.has an opporttunity to surprise Jennifer...

Glad you took the time to slesh out the story. Making it shorter could have ruined it. Good job now finish it

I can't wait to see what happens. Do Colette and Mark get married? How does it work out with Jen? Please keep writing.

Best story I've read on here yet please keep it going absolutly great work

This story was well written with a good deal of sex but with taste, too.

I truely hope you do continue with this story there is so much you could do with it at this point and if not I think those of us following this would at least appreciate you rounding it out in a final chapter you know marriage kids etc. Hopeing to see more xXleesilXx

keep it rolling its an awesomely flexible storyline

i love your work cant wait for more

Agree with everyone else. You have a great writing style. Please keep this series going!

You should at least put one or two chapters in and put a epilogue to end their tale of love, like their wedding and raising children, you know the basics.

Curious to read how they went forward. Maybe an open marriage for Colette and Mark with Jen as a secondary wife. When are they going to tell their parents? Does Colette get her handful of kids? Does Jen get pregnant as well? Will Tammy stick around? Does Mark actually get an education and a job?

It's a shame that you haven't made time to continue at this point. Still, thanks for a pretty good read.

Hello, is the author still here because I was looking forward to reading more. The previous comment pretty much sums up some of the questions that I have as well.

hope there is more to come sorta just left the story hanging there

Anyone know of the author is still around? Great story and series by the way. Just wish there were more chapters.

Hey dude please write 10th chapter

i m waiting for it

Wow this was a great story. You really got to know the characters and they developed so well, not to mention the awesome sex parts. You obviously haven't written anything in a while but a tenth chapter would be great, I would love to read about Colette and Jen with Mark at the same time. I noticed that throughout the stories you very frequently used 'o.k.' and the overuse of it was rather redundant. Maybe you should consider using similar words such as 'fine', and 'alright' to make it a little less redundant when you write. Also, it would look so much better if you used 'okay', rather than 'o.k.' as it looks rather tacky and was a slight annoyance whilst reading. Overall, an awesome story mate. 9/10

But the author has a day job... I'll eventually get back to this, but no promises on timing... sorry!

I thought it was amusing how the early commentators complained that this story's 'action' was happening too fast. And the later comments that the 'action' is too slow.

pourty, you must be doing something right if you manage to annoy people at both ends of the reader spectrum!

Myself, I enjoy your style of writing. I am grateful, that after some early uncertainty, your characters think, act and speak like adults.

Too many of the stories on Literotica and other sites, have the characters sounding and acting like they are twelve years old. No matter about the "Assume all characters are eighteen or older" crappola author statements required for all porn writing.

I hadn't checked on your stories for quite a while and was delighted to see more chapters! Thanks for continuing this work. I really enjoy the mix of emotion and eroticism with no porn stereotypes.

I have thought about it from time to time, sort of looking for it again. A beautiful, romantic story with believable characters and enough sex to make it very interesting. I would appreciate another chapter or two. Thank you for writing.

This one could take a lifetime to finish.

I hope, along with many others, that it doesn't.

We all await this wonderful journey to continue.

i still feel there is no love between brother and sisters. they are just horny bunch who are trying to get what they could and guess what .. i wont be surprised if brother bring in the girl friends and they would fuck him while girlfriend watch. by the way this was a good story. hope you continue.

Your kidding, right? No love between them, that's just ridiculous. Maybe your reading a different story than the rest of up were?.

it really seems there is little or no love between them coleen seems to have more love for mark than he does for her, if he really loved her would not have given his virginity to jen and sure wouldn't have fooled around with tammy. IF you continue keep it to just coleen and mark and figurre out how they will tell the parents what is going on. as is you have shown colleen loves mark but that he just wants to screw around with who ever he can.

PLEEEEEEASE wight another chapter

Seriously one of the best stories I've read, it had everything :) and I feel with your skills you could easily add a few more chapters. Wether the story needs them though is debatable. 10/10 great job

Love the story development waiting and hoping for more

So unlikely it was painful in places.Lets get it clear he goes around telling his sisters he loves them and immediately has sex with the other.They are seriously messing with emotions and it won't end well for someone.If he really loved Colette why would he want anyone else.It was spoilt by the sex with Jen after the trip.Its pretty clear Colette wanted a sole relationship.It would have been fantastic if you had developed that into being just the two of them.

Great Reading . Please let us hear more from you in the not too distant future.

Best story EVER........ Please add at least 2 more chapters. Mark and Colette MUST get married.

I can say with all conviction and certainty that if he really loved Colette as he said he did knowing she wanted a sole relationship he would have given her that and not gone with Jen on returning from the trip.Screwing with emotions is very dangerous and cruel and not something you do when you love someone as much as he says he does.Its easy to speak the words but they must be followed by action making it clear to Jen that he could not have sex with her.It may be a good fantasy to have two women but not in reality I could never have hurt her like that it would be like hurting myself.

I know these emotions as I have been 'married' to my sister for nearly 40 years.I never had a girlfriend because they never measured up to Sue.I found out she had been in love with me for three years although I never knew.She told Mum but Dad did not know.Mum made her promise not to say anything until I told her I was in love with her.I did when I was 18 and she 19.Dad went mad and we had to move to near Brixham, Devon where no one knew us.We have been totally committed to each other all our lives.We slept together every night though our parents kept saying it was inappropriate but nothing sexual took place except kissing they stopped telling us when they realised we were not going to stop.I cannot remember a time when we were not in love even as children except we never understood what it was.

Needs one more chapter making them sole and getting married and having her babies.

i know its been a few year but i'm itching for a conclusion to this masterpiece

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Please finish this story! It's been unfinished long enough. Love the story. It's really good and deserves a good ending!

great story needs more chapters we want to see them get married and have children but before that I want him to graduate college and get rich from something he invents maybe then they can get married and have children with Colette and maybe Jen has his kids too

Yes more

excellent story really enjoyed it. The love, the sex absolutely great and so well written the characters came to life.

It's such a pity that there won't be a conclusion written to the story to cover their lives together. The author hasn't uploaded anything for 5+ years.

I agree, there needs to be more done with this story. I wonder which sister gets pregnant first, or do they do it at the same time? What happens with Tammy, so many questions to be answered.

I hope this is not the end. So much more to this story yet, Do they do the 3some? Who gets married? Babies and parents to contend with too. PLEASE keep going.

unfortunately it looks like another great story unfinished

Come on, please finish this story properly, there is so much left unsaid and so much more to tell. Don’t keep us hanging for too long,😄

I'm flattered some of you love this story so much, I literally just pounded it out on the keyboard in moments of flow. And I guess that's the reason it hasn't been updated in so long, I just don't have the same interest or motivation for this story I once did. If I were to update with another chapter, I'd have to re-read the entire thing and then hope for inspiration, sadly, not sure I'm up to it.

I have not stopped writing, though I've stopped posting. I may post a few more things in the coming months. I certainly enjoy the site and am pleased that many of you find interest in my writing.

If it's any consolation, Mark, Collette and Jen are still dear characters to me. I'm certain they live happily ever after with lots of fat happy babies.

Have driven by Ellensburg several times, but only slept there once - last year in February during the snowpocalypse, before catching a flight back to Europe. Kind of a funny twist.

Just read this for the second time and it was as good as the first. My only disappointment is that I've finished it. Like all good stories I wanted it to go on for longer.

But it really does need a 'proper' ending, at the moment there are too many lose ends.

Maybe another chapter written say 5 or 6 years later would do it, so we know how everything turned out in the end.

But nevertheless those 9 chapters were damn good !

Rapier

I have just finished reading this for the second time. Your story is very well written, and, believable. I wish there was more, but, can appreciate your reluctance. All the best with future stories. I suspect they will be 5 Star as I gave each chapter here.

Love the story would actually like a fast forward to maybe like 3 years later to see what's going on with Mark and Colette

Great story can't wait to read more.

Brilliant story, but I wanted more.

Awesome. Glad you wrote this. I hope you have some time to write more chapters.