All Comments on 'College Daze Pt. 03'

by The Avenger

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mesmerised & hypnotised. You know it!

Incredible!!!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
This will be mentioned on the AH.

This story had a lot to excite me, such as sharing, anal sex, and bisexuality. There was even some kink and dominance. However, there was too much emphasis on humiliating Jeri (an unusual spelling for a man) and on taking Stacy away from him. Also, the writer seemed to preach against group sex and bisexuality, even as he sensationalized them (or perhaps it is simply his racism, which comes across in the story and is a bit distracting).

The use of euphemisms like "chocolate starfish" was a bit annoying, so I had to dock the writer a point (he got a 4 instead of the 5 he might have received). Still, it was a hot story, if you overlook the aforementioned issues. I hope that he comes back with more stories that have less emphasis on race and euphemisms and more on steamy sex such as was in this story. Stacy made it reading it worthwhile, to some extent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Loved It !

Black cock worship is the best. For a

submissive white boy to be on his knees

sucking black cock in front of his girlfriend,

getting fucked up his ass for her amusement,

this is just too hot, loved it !!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
america is a pussy for black cock

white and asian women crave superior black cock, it's just darwin, and white men also are pussies for black cock, and also they know they'd better go along with it and suck that motherfucker for their own good

black cock will rule america and the world!!!

MarvcusMarvcusabout 13 years ago
Potential

Great story. I'm not a fan of the humiliation part; however the story was great- all 3 parts. Great job. And I'm so sincere.

knotthd44knotthd44almost 3 years ago

Great story all 3 chapters made me hard! Keep up the great writing.

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