All Comments on 'College Is Hard'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
needs work " alot of work"

Whomever voted this a "hot" story should never be allowed to vote on this site again, get an editor also try a couple of rewrites before you hit the submit button.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hmmm, not too bad.

i didn't think it was too bad. it does needs some work but the overall idea of the story was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Quit slamming peoples stories

Everyone has different fantasies and different writing style preferences. I liked this story and thought it was a hot concept. I wish there were more like it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good!

....a lot is two words. Don't flame if you can't spell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good concept

But the execution is let down by poor grammar that reminds me of the "two wild and crazy guys" sketches on SNL, and practically every cliche in erotic fiction.

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