All Comments on 'College Sapphic Release'

What a wonderful sweet story of love.

Your 101% in my book.

Jacki

Nice story.

Not sure about the random capital letters, though.

And I would have thought that someone who loves Dickens would be able to spell his name!

Poor writing. Did not keep my interest.

was fantastic. I hope to read more, perhaps with Melissa getting involved the next time.

Nicely told story, although a few too many misspelled words. Not much tension or drama either; one knows within a few paragraphs what will happen, and that it will be wonderful. At least they didn't jump into bed the first day, but rather developed a close friendship before things got physical.

Not being a woman never mind a lesbian its a mystery to me what really turns them on,and what they really DO.All I know is that stories like this are very erotic and a delight to read.I would imagine its every mans fantasy to get involved with two lovely lesbians or bi women

Never mind the few typo mistakes ,they can be easily corrected,in fact I did not notice them ,I was to busy trying to cool down as I read this very erotic story. Most men ,love reading this sort of lesbian story,ME included.I am not in the least interested in gay male stories,but I certainly am when lovely girls get it on.

That was amazing!

I am here for stories like yours; stories that not only turn me on but leave me wanting more. Please, continue the story. I know time has gone by but the plot is too rich; far too rich, to let die. Personally, I would not mind it in the least if somewhere nearby, in the same college, maybe the couples know each other, two boys had a similar epiphanny.

Excellent - Rather Fast paced story. The Seduction description was very good.

Could we have a sequel ; bringing Melissa into the picture, for a threesome.

Ranji from Sri Lanka.

I loved the storyline and the characters. This story is more believable and told with more finesses than your "Freeing the lesbian within". I hope I don't seem too critical.

Love the work, keep it up

Says nothing not said by many hundreds of other stories in this category. Only, not as well.

The negative comments by critics who call it WOODEN mystify me. I'm a male, over 80 & retired journalist who thought the writing is 10 stars. The tenderness was palpable & the sex was superbly described. One of the BEST EVER!.....Uncle Bobby, Belleville, ON Canada.

An attempt at being romantic but goal not reached. The beginning interaction among both characters is boring. By the time the sex starts all the enthusiasm is gone and replaced by a dry tight "eye."

Points for trying.