All Comments on 'College Visit'

Simple story with great setting and insanely hot dialog. Loved the chemistry and absolute yearning for each other as they embrace in incestuous taboo.

Good story! Well balanced and even timing! More chapters please!!

Just a shame there wasn't more of it...........

fantastic

You made my dick very hard. Write more.

please write more tht was hot

Please write in the 3rd person next time. That would make it even better. A 3rd person is just you writing about the characters in the story.

Please add in another chapter!!!

A brother fucking his sister is cool. Shooting his cum into her womb is even better. Please continue the story. Tell us more about him riding his sister and cuming in her pussy. Excellent reading.

I liked your story, you have a nice touch with dialogue and description. I thought everything was a bit rushed and I wonder if you pace them a bit in part two. I will soon know as I see you have posted. Cheers so far. -- UK CYNIC.

It could have been longer, and they could have moved to the bedroom more gradually, shedding clothes along the way, but very very good!

ps, a couple too many, "rolling the eyes" more than needed for the punch line of her brother noticing her doing it.

I want to see part two in the story. I would like to see how the brother takes care of the sister sexually over the weekend and how the relationship develops between the two of them.

Please continue this story!

i submitted a part two last night

it should be up soon

thank you all for the wonderful comments!

I enjoy incest stories, especially siblings. Please write more

A beautiful story, well done.

Pls write some more

Every guy would love a hot little sister to love like Lissy...more, please!

I thoroughly enjoyed your little sibling incest tale. I just wish there had been more of it.