All Comments on 'Colorado Vacation'

I lost interest as soon as Grayson claimed to have a 9 inch cock.

very sexy clever story. wish there was a sequel. 5 stars

Please let us here more of this sordid tale.

oh fuck no

Gud. surprising.

But really, you should make a sequel off this!

she was not on the pill continue the story

either finish the story or delete it an unfinished story is never worth posting no matter how good and this wasn't good enough to leave unfinished. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T BOTHER STARTING SO EITHER FINISH OR DELETE NOW.

Too bad it never went anywhere. I applaud all the detail you put into the back-story, but, one hasty bedroom mix-up encounter and it's all over?

I like the way you incorporate details. The dad's tats, the wash-board stomach, dreams, etc. were all very smoothly woven into the story. And it was hot. Nice work.

Great story and build-up. The end was weak, though. Both dudes have nine inchers the same girth, do they? What a coinkidink. Grace isn't ever gonna talk to Jeff about that mind-blowing sex they had? Too drunk to remember might work for a while, but what about when it never happens again. She oughta be able to figure it out, dude.

Well.-------He has to tell her,but when?

And what about the other possibilites?

Gymmyt, what a lovley twist, for brother to so thoroughly and deeply bring an unknowing sister, to such a beautiful set of orgasms. I hope that there will be a continuation to this story, since so many possible characters, have not yet been involved.