All Comments on 'Come on Jack'

Just a minor point. Jack was away at the lodge for a weekend. He caught trout whilst fishing with Fiona and then had one of the trout for dinner. The story says that it was smoked by the chef. Problem.....smoking takes in excess of 48 hours plus the preparation time.

Sorry, being an ex teacher makes me pikky on small points.

jh

There was a recent fishing program on one of the Sky channels in the UK showing an angler catching a trout and smoking and eating it on the river bank within 2 hours of the capture??????? Lovely story, I hope they are happy and enjoy their remaining years together.

Extremely well written. Sexy but not overly done.

OK story, I guess.