All Comments on 'Comfort & Care Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great story

The story was great , not so far fetched.It was a turn on . You decribed the playes well and i could put myself in their places. All i need now is an Uncle.

dirtybear42dirtybear42over 19 years ago
JUST PERFECT

THE STORYTELLING IS AWSOME ! LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE SLOWLY BROUGHT A LITTLE MORE ABOUT EACH CHARECTER IN EACH CHAPTER

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very good

you must complete the story, it is a great one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
more?

Can' wait for more of this story.

steve8576steve8576almost 19 years ago
A Great Story

This is a great story, with believable characters and situation. The only negative is that it has been almost 9 months since this chapter. I sincerely hope that you write some more chapters for this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
only one complaint

Good story but I HATE it when writers treat college age girls like complete idiots...telling a college age girl what the term penis is and what cum is (semen) is stupid. Even the most naive college female isn't THAT dumb.

XxxBear79XxxBear79over 10 years ago
WOW !!!!!

I have read only 4 chapters of this story and have to say that it is the most erotic story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I hope there is more beyond Ch 05.

Thankyou for the enjoyment and the anticipation of the next page... :)

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