by OldDog
The story was great , not so far fetched.It was a turn on . You decribed the playes well and i could put myself in their places. All i need now is an Uncle.
THE STORYTELLING IS AWSOME ! LOVE THE WAY YOU HAVE SLOWLY BROUGHT A LITTLE MORE ABOUT EACH CHARECTER IN EACH CHAPTER
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
This is a great story, with believable characters and situation. The only negative is that it has been almost 9 months since this chapter. I sincerely hope that you write some more chapters for this series.
Good story but I HATE it when writers treat college age girls like complete idiots...telling a college age girl what the term penis is and what cum is (semen) is stupid. Even the most naive college female isn't THAT dumb.
I have read only 4 chapters of this story and have to say that it is the most erotic story I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I hope there is more beyond Ch 05.
Thankyou for the enjoyment and the anticipation of the next page... :)