All Comments on 'Coming Home Ch. 01'

very goodstory th only complaint is you never finished only a loser would start a story then never finish it

. . . write more!

Great work!

if you want a good or complete story look elsewhere this writer can't be bothered to finish a simple story total waste of time and spacewhere is the negative or delete button

ten years and still no second chapter the webmasters need to either demand all stories be completed or start deleteing the unfinished ones. half a story (and this was less than half) is worse than no story at all.

Enjoyed the great read. Please continue. Thanks