All Comments on 'Coming Home Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the great read. Please continue. Thanks

ten years and still no second chapter the webmasters need to either demand all stories be completed or start deleteing the unfinished ones. half a story (and this was less than half) is worse than no story at all.

if you want a good or complete story look elsewhere this writer can't be bothered to finish a simple story total waste of time and spacewhere is the negative or delete button

. . . write more!

Great work!

very goodstory th only complaint is you never finished only a loser would start a story then never finish it