All Comments on 'Coming Home Ch. 06'

Another fantastic chapter to this story. Keep up the great work!

I hope you will continue with this great work.

THIS WAS GREAT I LOVE THE STORY AND LOVE ALL THE SEX IN IT ,THIS WAS EAZY TO READ AND LEFT ME HORNY A LOT MORE THAN A FEW TIMES AT ONE TIME I WAS SO HORNY I JUST COULDN'T STOP READING THIS A GREAT JOB AND A GREAT STORY I HOPE YOU CAN ADD A FEW MORE CHAPTERS MAYBE TWO SISTERS PREGO, MIGHT BE DIFFERENT TWO BABYS RUNNING AROUND THE PLACE,AT ANY POINT I GIVE THIS STORY THE HIGHEST MARKS I CAN

5 STARS PLUS 5 STARS FOR EACH CHAPTER =30 STARS GREAT STORY

AND I LOVE THE ENDING SO FAR..........................................R..........................

loved it really,,,,well written for an incest tale,,,and no one did anal!! how refreshing !!!and not a lot of swearing, which never improves a story,,,,hooray!!

Very well done, I like the characterization and dialogue, the playful give and take, and bringing both girls into it was a nice turn-on, too. Wow, keep writing. I like series like this one that build and grow on the initial work and keep me reading, anticipating. Very hot stuff and well done!

From the first paragraph to the very end, what a great job. I'm going to find more of your stories so I can get off a second time....LOL

Totally fucking awesome story!! :)

Thanks VERY much for writing!!

my hand's been down my pants through all six chapters. awesome writing, autoplot.

thank you!

-a

...but I'm of two minds about involving the younger sister. I can see why it makes sense but I think it might have been better to focus on the increasingly intense relationship between Kerri and her father, rather than involve Kim.

Still, it was well written and sexy.

@restless I thought the same thing, but ultimately decided to go for it. One day soon I hope to upload a new tale which doesn't include any sisterhood. :)

Made an account just to mention a few things.

Amazing work. It is not even about smut at this point. I loved this degree of work you put into fleshing out the characters, their interaction, dialogue, and the situations they get themselves into. Couldn't turn away until I finished it all.

Amazing.

I would love to see more chapters to this story. Kim goes off to college, Kerri graduates from college and moves in with dad and together they start a horse farm. In the meantime, Kim finds a guy at school she falls in love with so that leaves just Steve and Kerri in the relationship. Three ways are just too complicated.

Thanks for the comment. I have an idea for a continuation, or at least an "ending" chapter, but I haven't had a chance to get around to it yet.

This series is great. I like that you touched on the jealousy aspect. It added realism to the character and the situation.

Two thumbs up!

"Coming Home Ch. 01 - 06" Mid- forties Year Old Widowed Father, Steve and Twenty-one Year Old College Senior, Kerri and Nineteen Year Old College Sophomore, Kim.

This is an awesomely, spectacularly well written and constructed incest father and daughter classic of a father and his two (2) daughters. The characterization of all three (3) principals are unique and spectacular in all aspects; the continuity details are simply well acted and easily followed. There should be some early years back ground information, i.e., the girl's (Steve's wife) mother, how Steve ended up living an almost hermit's existence (when his daughters are not there), etc.

Somewhere within the next one (1), and/or maybe two (2) chapters, I can imagine Steve and Kerri realizing they are eternally meant for each other and decide to begin a life and family, dedicated and vowed together. If Kim feels she has enough devotion to her father, she could be the third (3rd) wheel "babysitter,"

A brilliant start, loved it.

No. Absolutely not. Don’t include other people in the original relationship