by PhantomOp
Loved it !! Looking forward to more of this story . Keep it Cummmmming !!!
Hopefully it will be up soon. Currently writing chapter 3.
Loving the more cerebral consideration than normal of this subject.
A bit of a fairy tale, but if this chapter is anything like what the rest of the story is going to be like, then it's going to be one hell of a hot and eroic story.
He had better watch what he is thinking around his mom, or he will have her sexually too.
I hope to see more soon.
Thanks for the read.
Lets hope this story goes on for awhile and see where Tom goes with his Power and if anyone comes after him for the Rings Power.
"After all, weren't magic rings things that only appeared in fantasy stories?"
and having thought about it, it appears in a fantasy story.
: )
In the UK, descendants of a person with the same Christian names and surname don't add a numerical suffix as you have done for the London solicitors. This practice is peculiarly, American, I don't think any other Anglo society does so either.
A fantastic beginning to a great story. My only regret was that it ended to soon. I'd have loved to hear more about what happens now that he is starting to figure out about some of the secret powers he now has. Maybe he could have used them to help someone that was in trouble. That would be a change from the usual. Keep up the good work.