All Comments on 'Coming Into His Own Ch. 01'

by PhantomOp

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
nice story

A story i like.

Looking forward for the next one.

dirt043dirt043almost 12 years ago
LOVED IT !!!!

Loved it !! Looking forward to more of this story . Keep it Cummmmming !!!

PhantomOpPhantomOpalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Chapter 2 just submitted

Hopefully it will be up soon. Currently writing chapter 3.

BlueFinchBlueFinchalmost 12 years ago
Very good start

Loving the more cerebral consideration than normal of this subject.

t6billt6billalmost 12 years ago
good story

Would love to see more installments of this story.

MakdaddyMakdaddyalmost 12 years ago
Nice Start

Good start - i really enjoyed this - looking forward to more

bullshark524bullshark524almost 12 years ago

awesome story. i cant wait for more

lex33lex33almost 12 years ago
Great work!

Would love to see his mother get invovlved

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

I hope this will be the beginning of a veeery long story

Andromeda7Andromeda7almost 12 years ago
Good story.

Thanks for the story.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 12 years ago
A great start *****

A bit of a fairy tale, but if this chapter is anything like what the rest of the story is going to be like, then it's going to be one hell of a hot and eroic story.

He had better watch what he is thinking around his mom, or he will have her sexually too.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read.

C_frommnC_frommnover 11 years ago
Great Start

Lets hope this story goes on for awhile and see where Tom goes with his Power and if anyone comes after him for the Rings Power.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
I like your sense of humour

"After all, weren't magic rings things that only appeared in fantasy stories?"

and having thought about it, it appears in a fantasy story.

: )

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
English practise

In the UK, descendants of a person with the same Christian names and surname don't add a numerical suffix as you have done for the London solicitors. This practice is peculiarly, American, I don't think any other Anglo society does so either.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story

A fantastic beginning to a great story. My only regret was that it ended to soon. I'd have loved to hear more about what happens now that he is starting to figure out about some of the secret powers he now has. Maybe he could have used them to help someone that was in trouble. That would be a change from the usual. Keep up the good work.

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