All Comments on 'Comings and Goings'

by biteyspoony

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 9 years ago
Okay

But what we really want to know is who came and who went?

bruce22bruce22over 9 years ago
Quite an intricate piece of work

Nice idea and good execution.

biteyspoonybiteyspoonyover 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Hi Bruce, I'm glad you liked. I know everyone everywhere says based on a true story, but this really is my chat log, less intricate planning and more seizing the opportunity. But thanks.

And betrayed, I'm extremely literal so if that was an actual question, I came twice, my partner didn't come until the next morning, and I don't think any of my housemates got off thinking about me. He left work. That was the leaving part. And if it was just a cute comment, cool. It excites me that people might be getting off to my work.

Also, I am really into feedback if anyone wants to share. And I'm kicking myself for accidentally rating my own story with a 1 if anyone wants to help bring that score back up.

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