All Comments on 'Competitors'

Wow, what an awesome and descriptive narrative, so much more real and not fluffed up. ainu2, you have a very great gift of writing, keep up the great stories like this one.

ainu2,<BR>

"Competitors" was very fun to read, and sufficiently engaging that giving attention to the mechanics (grammar; story threads; etc.) was difficult and sporadic.<BR><BR>

Hopefully you will continue to write and I expect to throughly enjoy your stories... in fact, I anticipate having found another favorite author.<BR><BR>

Thanks!<BR>

- I.M. -