All Comments on 'Complaisant'

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nakdsubnakdsubabout 11 years ago
So, you despise the way he treats his wife, then...

You treat her 10 times worse? Yes sir, that's really showing the bastard, isn't it.

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
First Come See The Game!!***

And now this. What's wrong??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
What the hell is wrong with you?

Wrong catagory, wrong plot and just plain fucking wrong. I would say the author is a total retard; but that would be a compliment.

Do us a favor and zip tie a plastic bag over your mouth.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
look peteswick

favored you that makes you a sicko.

x_witless_xx_witless_xabout 11 years ago
Very good! Clever little flash story.

Gave me a chuckle. Favorited. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Fun story

And everyone else lighten the fuck up. It is a story, not a lesson in morality. She was willing and interested.

ILienBagbyILienBagbyabout 11 years ago
You meant to say

compliant, not complacent!

Look it up.....you have to get language right, especially when you are attempting to present us with a logical conundrum.

ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
"My wife does what she's told"

Fred's wife, surely?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Good story

Five stars. Fuck the critics.

thebuffalothebuffaloabout 11 years ago

Enjoyed the read. Thanks for writing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Funny

Funny and erotic and a little food for thought. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Funny until you realize that he's basically turned her into a randomly violent cheating whore. Dude may be an ass, but there are lines.

Mandy01Mandy01about 11 years ago
To ILienBagby and others indire need of an education with the English language.

Whether you like the story or not, the author had it right with his spelling. how about you read your dictionary instead.

com•plai•sant

adjective

inclined or disposed TO please; obliging; agreeable or gracious; compliant:

the most complaisant child I've ever met.

Can be confused with: complacent.

complaisant comes from compliant.

com•pla•cent

adjective

pleased, especially with oneself or one's merits, advantages, situation, etc., often without awareness of some potential danger or defect; self-satisfied: The voters are too complacent to change the government.

For myself...I enjoyed the little tale of karma coming back to bite Fred on his complacent arse. Five stars from me

And to the annon who thought Joe was worse than Fred...not so, Joe gave Mary every chance to renege, and she choose to do his bidding. All's good

Thanks for the read

Amanda

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Bad story

1*-TRASH

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Bad Story

One Star. Fuck the critics.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Sick Stuff

All characters are fucked up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Com.....ant

Ok 1/2 star, piss on the critics.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The story is a hoot!

Mandy_01, loved your comment. This is a nice twist on the controlling ass of a husband story. Joe included her in the decisions, even at the start as he watched for her reactions. Hubby set it all up, so if she wants to get something back for herself then have at. No bitch to burn here. Just a bastard who needs an adjustment. Karma-the queen bitch.......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Huh?

Intriguing twist of logic and a good poke at a puissant prick.

However that title........ Look, it's either "Complacent" or it's "Compliant".... I don't don't care which you choose, frankly, they could either one open doors and offer directions for two or three more in a series along this line. But "Complaisant"????? Really, what is that?

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 11 years ago
It would be nice to have a woman like that

With a woman like Mary at your pleasure, old Fred wouldn't be getting very much pussy anymore.

I liked the story.

Thanks for the read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I liked it alot

When I got married I had PLANNED on being as obedient as Mary. Unlike Mary, my husband found my limits and tried to push me past them too much for me to stay compliant as Mary. I didn’t mind the groping in front of his friends while without panties or making pornos with him but I couldn’t get myself to do the streaking in public he kept on me to do. I’m sorry but I was just to scared of getting in legal trouble for doing that. I like that he is bossy and aggressive. I even like that he pushes my limits with his friends. I just don’t like to be humiliated in a bad way, get a bad reputation or get into legal trouble. Anyways, I really liked your story. I wish I was her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
dear annomny YOU'RE A FUCKING VILE PISSANT

and you don't even write stories. Gave it a 5

SarahwithloveSarahwithlove11 months ago

Oh my, that was entertaining. Loved it

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