by PaulStevens
Ok a the first couple of chapters I didn't really get into and at times it was hard following the story with missing chapters, but I really came to like the characters and the felt for them in a lot of ways (man you put the women though hell). Once they were on the Island and started open up Mels emotions more I got attached, had to read each parts as soon as they were up. I can't wait for a complex family. Keep up the good work.
we want more coollssplease sqhead