All Comments on 'Complications'

Boy, this guy was nuts!

What a waste of time reading this crap.

It needs work, it's not a total disaster though. Grammar and spelling problems. Learn about your subject and how they work. I would rather say what i think may help than just put a writer down. You have a degree of talent for this and the nerve to put it out here for others to read and comment. I don't have that talent or bravery, but I'm not one to just bitch about things. Don't give up.

You write a lot but you cant write worth a shit.

I think I found one of your stories worth more than a handful of used toilet paper but I may be wrong on that count. It might be none.

This ridiculous horse shit was aimed at the brain damaged knuckle draggers and no one else, clearly.

Sucky writers should just quietly find a new hobby. Like collecting ear wax. You might be good at that, its peaceful and calming, and less embarrassing in the long run junior.

n

Hi! I read this a long time ago, but never commented. I've reread it, and it still still rings the same bells. It was fun and interesting. I thought Sam mentioned too many girls. I thought Charlie would end up better than a pro. Poor Samantha; she was such a waste. She had it all and threw it away.

By the way, your writing is fine. Heck it's free!

thanks again

carvohi

A long convoluted story with a crap ending.

YAWN!

ok i am a weasel is an asshole

Okay story and I like the arsehole Cole and the slut were handled, but honestly the MC is a moron for marrying the slut in the 1st place.

That’s what you get for marrying a fucking whore. The guy deserved it for being such a cunt.

Czasami się zastanawiam czy faktycznie są tacy faceci, czy tylko w opowiadaniach, czy rod meski tez staje się zniewieściały ?

Effed up mess.