All Comments on 'Computer Problems'

by lunaswift

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ErotonautErotonautabout 11 years ago
Nice story, but...

(a) This would have probably been a better fit for "non-consent"

(b) Brian's final act would most likely have led to his shop being closed down

On the 'pro' side, the addition of the woman outside, and the turmoil inside her own head, was a really smart move and cranked up the erotic buzz in the latter scenes.

QuincyManQuincyManabout 11 years ago
Thank you.

Enjoyed your story. Keep 'em comin! ;)

steve44uksteve44ukabout 11 years ago
Thank you.

Very, very hot. And well-written too. I thoroughly enjoyed this, many thanks.

lunaswiftlunaswiftover 10 years agoAuthor
Enjoyed this?

It's part of the Girls Get Wet collection, have a look at lunaswift.com for similar stories.

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