All Comments on 'Concealed Passion'

Literotica could use more talents such as yourself around these parts. You've got an incredible gift with humor and erotica, and damned if you don't know how to spin a good romantic yarn with great characters-something sorely lacking as well (good romantic yarns). I can't begin to tell you how tired I am of the BDSM you find in the majority of most submissions, especially Lesbian submissions. Does no one like a good romance anymore?!

This is the fourth story of yours I've read, and the fourth time I've been so completely impressed. Well done.

I do hope you choose to write more, perhaps something more towards the light-hearted and romantic... really stretch those comedy muscles ;3

Regardless; Well done!

well written , well ballanced, poised.. a fine short story ...thanks

A beautifully written, deeply felt and highly involving story about two real women.

Wanda

What a rare find! Well written, insightful and nicely paced...loved it!

Everything was top shelf, I have to say, but I took particular delight in the cat named Monty. Only because I once had such a dear feline friend myself and he seemed to share many of the traits of the one depicted in the story.

I really hope you continue this! It was amazing to read - passionate, loving, just so many things. Your writing is impeccable and I really hope to read more in the future. Keep up the fantastic work and once again, I hope you do continue this!

please continue...

You wrote a bit in 2010. That you stopped makes me think the story is real. I hope you are ok.

The writing was really good and the storytelling was enchanting. Someday, hopefully soon, I hope you will write more of this story. Maybe 2 stories: one how I fear things played out and another how I hope things played out.

Of course, this story could be complete and utter fiction, and you just stopped submitting to Literotica. Either way, I hope good things for you, but you should write more. Write something somewhere. Your talent should not wither.

Thanks for sharing this.

I loved your story and long for more.

How can you just end it like that?

It is as if you wrote a chapter of a book and after getting us hooked you stopped writing. I hope this confession and obvious compliment stirs your writing juices and find it in your heart to continue this sensual and erotic journey.

Please, what happens now?

Well. not finished...

Another great five-star story from you and you really know how to wring the emotions. But now I want to scream with frustration. You have ended the story with the perfect cliff-hanger and then four years later... nothing! Are we to spend the rest of our lives wondering what you intended to follow this? I hope not.

Please don't tease us. Will there be a sequel, I'm dying to know what happens?

An accelerated love story quickly abbreviated by the last few lines. Im sad, because its unlikely we will ever know what was the outcome. The other stories this writer posted here are something of a compensation. But still poor enough to wish for a proper resolution.

ColdCat, I've just discovered your stories (accidentally so there must be a reason) and I've thoroughly enjoyed each one. But in a few days' time it will be six years since you left the readers of "Concealed Passion" dangling on the edge of a cliff-hanger. Will we ever get to know what happens next?

This story is wonderful, but it needs to be finished ! PLEASE !!

Oh no why must it be so! Unfinished is such a sad word.

Lovely Story, shame it had such a disappointed ending.