- Gay Male
- Condemned Ch. 04
- Page 2
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Click hereI realised I was fidgeting and forced myself to stop. "Couldn't be better," I said flatly.
I thought he was making fun of me as he started fidgeting, it took me a moment to realise that he was actually nervous. "You're afraid of me?" He said, as if it was an accusation.
"Yeah," I said, turning around to look him in the eyes. "I thought that was what you wanted. For me to be afraid of you."
"What can I say," He said, moving a little closer to me. "Things have changed." And then he leaned down and pressed his lips against mine, pressing him body into me. And Jesus only knew why but I started kissing him back.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 13 years agoI'm English and I say Mom. lol! I think you're watching too much tv. Not everyone talks like the queen!
Love the stories, keep em coming!!!
Anonymousover 13 years agoGreat story, love your perspective. Though you have a few grammatical problems, and it's odd that he's British and he says mom not mum lol
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoThis is an awesome story! There better be more submissions or I am gonna be extremely upset! lol
Anonymousabout 14 years agoPlease more more or finish it please. Like I keep coming back to check this story, like this story is so better than many stupid vampire stories. Except this one isn't stupid at all, it's like if that was actually happening. I simply love this story. I know you probably have a busy life and all but please can you finish this one and the defiance. PLEASE. I BEG.
Anonymousabout 14 years agoso vampires dont make too much of a change to brum then?
love it and can't wait to read more!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI loved both Condemned & Defiance! Please finish them I am so sick of getting into a story and then never having an ending. I need the rest of these stories! Please!
Anonymousover 14 years agoYou're a very talented writer! I'm torn between what I love more; Condemned or Defiance! Keep up the good work!
Anonymousover 14 years agoI love your stories, but condemned is my favorite. So happy for an update, and what a surprise at the end. Always looking forward to more :)
Anonymousover 14 years agoI read the first chapter of this story and it was SO familiar.
Then I realized I had read it before... probably several months ago. Where have you been? (:
It's really good though. I hope we get another chapter in less than a month.
Thanks.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI've been waiting forever for you to continue this story. And you delivered once again. :)
pixir32178over 14 years agoI've been waiting and hoping you would continue writing, in any of your stories. I love them all. This was another great chapter hope the next comes soon.
