by roydavis25
I enjoyed reading this and i look forward to more, i hope you dont listen to the other comment because they have no clue about what a good story is and if they dont like interracial stories then why read them.
OK, you are a good story teller, but you are careless with spelling, grammar, tense use, etc. In other words, you write a good story but your technique needs polishing. Thanks for the pretty good work.