by LonelyMom
But in the very first paragraph of the first chapter, Peg says she's eighty-six . . .
That was great - only read this part so far. I like how you can make "normal" things seem so taboo by changing the time frame - a blowjob seems much more erotic and scandalous way back in teh "good old days." Nice work - I plan to read the rest.
Your story just gets better and better. Your characters are rich and real. I feel that I reach out and touch them.
As I've said before, the author is doing a very good job at describing the flavour of the times.
She's also doing a wonderful job at describing the changes that the main character is going through away from the world the woman grew up in.
Niicely done.
It is so nice to read a story with both. I can't wait to see where this all goes. Keep the chapters coming.
Comment from an old timer reliving a few memories myself.