by Pussyrider
Excellent story... well written and very hot... thanks for sharing...
Your chapter 1 is a blast :D excellent, i'll boorkmark you buddy cause im sure chap 2 will be a hit :D please include Diana's ordeal if its possible, most of the time, pity fuck is very arousing, specially when a young nurse and an old patient is involve. okay? :D
Nice buildup and well-drawn characters. Short but sweet, and had a genuine feel.
I agree with Class "A". This was a great story, the buildup was beautiful. Involving Diana more in the next chapter somehow would make it good too. Hope to see more.
Wow. Great story, beautifully and carefully told. The characters are vivid. The build up was brilliant. The climax was awesome. Can’t wait to read more.