by Seahawk76
carli and melissa are so cute together, i would love to read more.
Can't say I have done it in a mall but I have in a shop in a mall buying a new set of panties and bra and a shoe shop of course. Cool fun.
As a writer myself I often read here for inspiration. I found your chapters here to be well thought out and executed. Love to read more. So keep on scripting my friend. Awesome indeed.
Is there more of this? Is this how Melissa ends the story?
Confessions is a great pair of stories i just wish you were around to write the 3rd part.
Awesome story so far...
I'd love to find out what happens next when Melisa & Carli get together. How far would she push herself...
Fucking excellent! Please keep writing these, they are so hot! I can't wait for the third installment! Before I read this story, I thought I was the only one that felt this way... You captured "that heady feeling" perfectly. Lol, although I have never walked through a mall :P. This has become one of those "best" stories for me, and there are only a select few of those ;). I am literally begging you to write more!
This is the best exhibitionist series I've ever read. You're a great writer. I wish you would write a continuation.
I'd like a continuation of this series. They are hot! Thanks for writing, keep up the good work.
I love this series and really want to see a continuation! All of your stories are great, and I'm gonna go read more right now!
I can't believe no one else has commented on this story. I really wish you'd write a third chapter. It's an amazing story.
I recently read Allison's Inheritnce and loved it. Confesons is even better! Loved the tension, fear and excitement your characters experienced. Are you sure your not an exhibiionist yourself??
I hope there is more to Confessions, surely there is more story now that you've brought Carli back.