by TheDougler80
agreed.... and editor, please. I'm not sure I agree with the premise..... but we'll see how it goes in round 3.
4 stars.
I she she does get her revenge and gets to rape him with the strap-on eventually.
I know, I know. Look, I write these in Word on a public computer, I can't save. I write all my stories in one sitting, and have just enough time to read 'em over once and copy and paste. I apologize if it detracts from the enjoyment of the story.
Well said. It's great when a story is immaculately written, punctuated and spelled, and a raft of errors can and does spoil the flow - but one or two glitches here and there are perfectly acceptable.
Some people seem to think it fine to post rude or curt one-liners in response to a story that took hours to compose and put on the site. They're wrong, though - it's a lack of manners and sign of ignorance on their part.
I enjoyed the story enormously. Keep it up, please - it did me!
J