All Comments on 'Confusion Ch. 05'

too short

And its not even told good. 1*

dwornock

Giving a "1" for a short chapter is just another reason why you suck and nobody likes you.

Geeze. What a moron

In a perfect world . . . Things always seem to fall together nicely and conveniently.

dumb cuck shit.

5 ***** Good story, with twists and turn that should hold interest of even the BTB crowd.

pretty good story except that it has a lot of repetitions. The story really doesn't have a body to it, And then there's no direction either.

Just being technical here, but Joe pushed into Diane's vagina while she thought he was Don. That was rape, Jenny.

Sorry, in an earlier comment, i used the word "log" as what diane had said to joe(describing his dick) before they fucked a 2nd? time. rereading , she used the word "salami" and maybe the word "big" in front of it, my short term memory may be fading. rk