All Comments on 'Confusion Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Sorry, in an earlier comment, i used the word "log" as what diane had said to joe(describing his dick) before they fucked a 2nd? time. rereading , she used the word "salami" and maybe the word "big" in front of it, my short term memory may be fading. rk

onbothsidesonbothsidesabout 2 years ago

Just being technical here, but Joe pushed into Diane's vagina while she thought he was Don. That was rape, Jenny.

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 2 years ago
wow,

pretty good story except that it has a lot of repetitions. The story really doesn't have a body to it, And then there's no direction either.

fishgetterfishgetterover 3 years ago

5 ***** Good story, with twists and turn that should hold interest of even the BTB crowd.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

dumb cuck shit.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333about 11 years ago
Enjoyed it

In a perfect world . . . Things always seem to fall together nicely and conveniently.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
dwornock

dwornock

Giving a "1" for a short chapter is just another reason why you suck and nobody likes you.

Geeze. What a moron

count2threecount2threeover 12 years ago
What a fucked up Story.

And its not even told good. 1*

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