All Comments on 'Congratulations'

Thanks for any feedback you can give. This is my first story and I appreciate your thoughts. If you have anything else very specific you'd like to mention, feel free to send a message directly to me, even if it is something minor.

I liked the story and found it believable. Drew might have wanted more but reality seems to gotten in the way.

Beautifully written with good grammar... something too often missing on this website. One tiny suggestion: the orgasms could have been a little longer and more explicit.