All Comments on 'Connor Thomas Ch. 13'

good but too short :)

cant wit for the next chapter

This story has really grown on me since I started reading it yesterday. I didn't know what to think of Conner at first, but he is turning out to have his own charm. The last couple of chapters seemed a little rushed, but they were still good. I really like the closeness of Conner and his friends. I hope you let him return to them in some way after everything is settled. It sucks that he and Vivian can't fully mate, they seem to really love each other. I can't wait to see what is in store in the next chapter. Take the time you need to really flesh it out. I was blown away by some of the previous chapters. The story is unconventional and original, which is hard to accomplish. You have done really well with it.

i want 14 to come out.. would love for him to see candice in his true form.. been waiting for the next chapter for so long. This is a great storie hope you dont abandon it

I love Connor, he is on my mind almost every day but my job gives me very little free time. Between that and a 5 year old it's hard to squeeze him in. I have most of 14 worked out but can't get it all put together in a way that pleases me. So please hang in there with me. I will gladly email anyone when new stories are posted, just send me you address.

Thanx for all the support,

The Rev.

You are a true artist! This story has everything and has a perfect flow to it!

whens the next story comin out?