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by SecretKR

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WOULD'VE

voted a '5' sooner; but your submission was not in BDSM or NonConsent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
TOOOOO LONG

Your intro & build-up was way too long with much useless information about the caracters. The end was shorter and needed more details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Womans point of view...

Loved it!! The beginning was a little lengthy but I don't think that's a bad thing. It's nice to read more than just the sex, it gives you a feel for the characters. thanks for the good reading!

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