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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Womans point of view...

Loved it!! The beginning was a little lengthy but I don't think that's a bad thing. It's nice to read more than just the sex, it gives you a feel for the characters. thanks for the good reading!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
TOOOOO LONG

Your intro & build-up was way too long with much useless information about the caracters. The end was shorter and needed more details.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
WOULD'VE

voted a '5' sooner; but your submission was not in BDSM or NonConsent.

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