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be_cruel13be_cruel13over 16 years ago
Too fast...

Great beginning, and the details within the story were nice, but the story itself went way too fast. Just as I was starting to get excited, it was like wham-bam-thank you ma'am, and it was over!! Sloooowwww ittttt dooooowwwnn....

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