All Comments on 'Convincing Me Pt. 08'

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Sexy_LisaSexy_Lisaover 9 years ago
Beautifully Written

I loved this story. Please write more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
longer!

I love love love this story line, but it's too short. It would be awesome if you would maybe combine 2 of your chapters into 1?

redlion75redlion75over 9 years ago

maria is her mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg i knew there was some kind of twist cumming.nah just kidding though it would be kind of fucked up

DiJiTDiJiTover 9 years ago
This is an AMAZING series

I love the two characters and how they interact.

I just wish these chapters were longer so I could have more to enjoy.

....Please submit the next chapter soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

Yeah, I the only thing I "dislike" is that the chapters are short, but that's mainly selfish. The story is becoming so incredibly tender and powerful. This is really great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice

Liked the story very much, but it didn't start getting interesting til about half of chapter 2 and so on. Great story though :) I liked it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great series

I hope you continue with these two as not only is it sexy, your series has the wonderful message of getting to know someone before judging. In today's society that is a very rare message; I am a dude who hates judgmental people. Side note: I'd love to hear more jokes from the dad because he had some great one liners and is an overall likable guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Come on! It's been almost a month! Where's chapter 9 already?!

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