All Comments on 'Corporate Ladder'

You need to take your 3 editors to task for the spelling mistakes throughout the story.

Length was fine and the story line was very good.

All in all a nice read.

Good ending BTW.

find it erotic, more like trailer park trash for low life's. Dialog was coarse and emotions, except lust, were non existent. For a novella it had no story to interest me and just a fuck fest reserved for patrons of adult video shops and glory hole attenuates . What women fucks two guys she meets in an apartment entry? and what manager blackmails an employee to sex on a bet and what employee allows it to happen, next call, the lawyer. Dumb story and boring. TK #1

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