All Comments on 'Cory's Coming'

by Alpheratz

Sort by:
  • 8 Comments
sleepyestbearsleepyestbearabout 18 years ago
Just too good

I loved it. It was a perfect mix of real life humor and romance. I can hardly wait to read your next offering.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
A real story with realism and minimal bull

This was real people having a real good time I thought it was excellent just how good sex should be.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great

You know the score!

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good, real loving sex and more

And youngsters think they have it all...just like I did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
A Romantic

As a Grumman owner, Thanks . You capured the romanticism of the plane and of the era.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
You're good

Alpheratz:

I also suspect and hope that I'm going to read your future tales and they're going to just get better and better. Don't lose your sense of humor in your stories. That helps so much to make your story so good. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Been There Done That

A great story with a fine word picture of the Lady. It brought back enough memories to bring tears to my eyes. Enjoy your work hope you keep on writing

kalodinkalodinover 11 years ago
Just Wow!

My girl and I just read this wonderful story together. We love it. T.Y. And the writing is damned fine, plot, use of language, round characters that we may identify with strongly.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous