All Comments on 'Costumes'

It's funny how these costume characters mix together. Good piece!

Hamster needs to get a grip! The language was fine.

This was a good quicky.

I agree with Hamster. The story would be a lot better if told simply. As it is, it just comes across as pretentious.

Very hard to get by your awkward flowery language. Could have been a good story for that. You need to be more plain spoken and colloquial. And your stories would be more approachable.