by LynnGKS
Lynn, I'm glad you wrote a Chapter II about Barry, Betty and BB. Good flow and emotional connection between characters. Please continue the storyline.
I think Betty has "matured" since the first chapter. In a positive way.
It was great seeing Betty grow past her jealousy and the friendship grow between her and BB. That's what made this story grow on me. The chemistry between the characters. Keep more coming.
Great awesome just read both parts hopefully there will be more to cumm !!!!! Keep up the great work
. . . a very good story. I do enjoy your imagination and perspective Lynn.
Part two was even more sensual and erotic than the first part. Every man's fantasy to have two wonderfully sexy willing women.
So I will give you a 5 and look forward to more. Thank you
You have me feeling sorry for BB. She is a good hearted lady who needs someone special. Being Godmother to Betty's children will not be enough.
Great story.
You are a great writer Lynn! Your works are very very good........when you stay away from the cuck stories that is! lol sorry I couldn't resist! I do wish you would write more stories that have nothing to do with cuckoldry!!! 5*
I wonder what happens when he makes both of them pregnant at the same time? Will the hormonal overload kill him?
your story was magnificent how you build up the relationship between the 3 of them
i would love some mature woman 20 this year and hoping for one :p and again beautiful story
You made my cunt wet before the end of the first page. Wonderful, literate prose. One tiny note. The first wine they drank was Sauternes, not 'sauterne.' (Not everybody knows about that S!) Thanks again.
Terry in Laguna Beach
Shouldn't the description have been, "She's got to be as horny as a mountain lion" (i.e. a cougar), as opposed to a "mountain goat". Generally speaking a goat is a metaphor for a guy (as in "He's a horny old goat").
Wish there was a continuation, where Betty will join them in a 3some and then they will arrange a 4some with the CEO doing Betty and she will test if her husband will become jealous or not.
Scenario2: BB should've arranged his promotion on condition that the CEO will have a night with Betty while her hubby watches...