All Comments on 'Count Down To Moonlight Ch. 08'

i wanna no wat happened to duncan! (other wise it was excellent)

Great job! I'm so happy you got another chapter out. I can't believe that Duncan can only get death or banishment. Hmm how can this end well? Even if Keelay goes to be with him, how will he survive without his pack? Keelay is taking this better than I expected her to. I"m surprised she hasn't demanded an answer as to where duncan is. Also, how was he able to leave her? Wouldn't his wolf's instinct to protect her overpower his human? Clearly his wolf is very strong. Keep writing!!!

The new chapters are good, but after such a long hiatus, these little teasing glimpses of the story are a bit dissatisfying. Do it your way. However, if this is going to be the story flow, I think I'll wait a few chapters and then read.

...Really, I am so anxious to read the continuation...

Please let us know!

I know what he did wasn't right, but didn't his own grandfather break the rule by changing his grandmother and Jake kinda brought that on hisself knowing how territorial a werewolf is about their mates.

Hurry with the next chapter.

Just found this story and read ch 1-8.

Nice variation on a fairly common

theme in this genre. Looking forward

to more!

I hope they haven't killed Duncan. I hope that Keeley and Duncan get to become mates. I like this story very much.

If she is afraid of Duncan, why isn't she afraid of werewolves she has never met? She's drawn to Duncan and she's still afraid. She has no connection to the others, does she?

Looking forward to finding out where Duncan is and how they will get together. Make the next chapter longer, if you can!

Great story so far, can not wait to read more!

This is an amazing story I don't care what anyone says it is fantasic plz continue writing more I want find out what happened in th end plz finish please

Please make the chapters longer. I really enjoy this story and I'm glad that you decided to continue. Other than a few editorial errors, the new chapters are pretty good.

I don't think it's the best idea to split up a newly mated pair. I think he could help her adjust.

Great story plzzzzz continue!!!!!

WTF............ she will go through hell!!!! You know this right???? She going through a process that binds her to him without the source and doesn't yet know what has happened. I am feeling this story...I can see numerous outcomes. I hear many tortured sighs for all involoved. Keep going and let's see if we are on the same road.

Get. An. Editor!

So, is this story going to be finished or just left where it is?

I really hope you plan to finish this story. This is a terrible place to just leave off with absolutely no explanation as to what happened to Duncan. While punishment would seem appropriate, Keely didn't do anything wrong, and to force her to suffer through the changes she's about to face without her mate would be cruel and unbearable for her. Not to mention what will happen if her wolf is separated for too long from her mate. In most cases wolves die without their mates. I hope you opt to continue the story soon!

finish this! please.

I really like your story please finish.

Has been a very long time since you posted. I know well how life interfears with what we want to do by giving us things we must do, but please - try and find time to finish Keelay and Duncans story. If you would like the help of an unprofessional yet willing editor i would love to have the opportunity. But wether you wish to take on an editor or not - please, please, finish the story

love your story, I also hope that you have the next chapter ready soon!

Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is great and torturous please finish soon!

Hi.

Sorry it's taking so long to finish this story, I am in the process of finishing honest, I'm going to submit the last few together as I know you want to find out the ending.

It's taking me so long because there have been a few things happening in my life that, well aren't all good and I have had to put the story on the back burner while I sort my life out. Plus my laptop decided to take a permenant shut down and i am having to write it all on my iPhone. Which takes ages lol. But I promise, while I can't give you a exact date, you won't have to wait much longer.

Sorry to hear about your troubles. I wish u the best and hope its all resolved soon. Eagerly waiting for your ending to the series. Cheers.

Its long overdue....when are you posting new chapters?

I love story so far. Could we have more?

Your series is addicting, I hope you continue it soon....

Its ashame this story was never finished... nearly 2 years without a update so i guess its safe to say 'The End'.

I just read all of the story....

Is this it?

Will you just leave it thus way?

This story deserves to be completed. The best strategy would be to finish the whole story before posting it, and you said you were doing just that, so please please please post the rest of the story as soon as possible... This story is so good that it gets frustrating not to have closure... Your writing is very good, creative and gripping, and if you updated more frequently, you could be considered a really good writer on this site!

please please don't tell me its the end.Finish it please

Plz finish this.

Where are you

Please finish this story!

......... from 2012 u say don't have to wait much longer.. ...... now is 2018........ :(

What a pity not knowing the ending........

It is so aggravating to be deeply enthralled in a good story and to open the next door and step off into emptiness. I may never publish another story, but I pledge never to begin posting one before it is completely written. PN

This

abrupt end is quite disappointing