All Comments on 'Courting a Vampire Ch. 02'

so far so good... I know a writer has there own way of doing things so all I do is suggest, so... I would like to see more in a chapter as a whole this, so far, 2 part series could have been combined into 1 chapter, but that is just an opinion from a fairly new reader. I am not very patient and tend to pick up stories later in chapters for that fact but your series caught my eye. Good Luck...

Definitly looking forward to the story. Wish there was more in the chapters

That the chapters so far are too short. They could have easily been a single chapter. While this single chapter would have still been short, at least it would have completed a thought. Great concept, though. I am enjoying the story so far, and the pace is excellent. If you wish to continue with these brief excerpts, I'll simply wait until there are several on offer before reading.

But u need to make these chapters longer if u wanna keep ur readers happy. but so far so good u might want to start writing now good luck

I'm anxious to get to the part where Lilly meets her fiance.

The dangerous competition for his affections is an interesting twist. A little hard to reconcile with the concept of having been betrothed in utero, perhaps. It will be fascinating to see how a human holds up.

You've got me hooked.

3 vamps and a human courting a Prince, now that would be very interesting.....

Read it at work first thing in the morning. Little sister, you have created something that I would love to read for a very long time. The flow of this story is like a velvet. THANK YOU DARLING! СПАСИБО ДОРОГАЯ.

I also wish the chapters were longer but if you keep posting a page a day, that would be fine. I doubt you'll be able to keep it to one page once the competition starts heating up.

More to short.....

Wish it could be a lot longer....but I'm hooked!

more please. I am to excited now.

I'm happy to have found this story. It's really good. Remember this is your story.You get to tell it the way you want in the time you want. I would love if this were an everyday story, and hate if you rushed it just to post daily and ruined the storyline.

It is a good storyline. I don't believe I have read this scenario before. I look forward to following Lily as she battles for her life and courts a Vampire.

I'm loving this story but please I want it longer than one page. would make a brilliant book to. Flesh it out more and it would be an excellent manuscript.

I totally agree i love da stry bt da updates r way to short bt so far u r doin great!!

Ive never written on Literotica before so I wasn't aware of the difference between the sizes on the site, I already submitted three chapters for review before chapter one was accepted, so chapter three will also be short, however realizing my mishap, I started combining chapters so starting chapter four, they will be longer. Thank you so much for the comments!!

Please keep writting you are a wonder at it. It's just so refreshing and different I was sadden when the chapter was over so quickly. I read what you said about ch.4 So I'm waiting for them to release it. I hope it's very quick. Thanks

StormHerald, I am enjoying your story, don't let readers dictate how long your chapters are.

Thank you! I completely agree. Write for yourself first. If you stress about it, it will be terrible. I love this series and am staying up way too late to read it.

Okay...1....Your story has me rooted to the spot. It's lovely and captivating!

2. Ignore the people who are telling you to write longer chapters. Honestly, I have two accounts on this site, this one I've only just barely begun writing on. To get at least 2 pages on literotica is to write 10 pages on a regular Word Processor. Some people do not understand that most people have lives and do not have the time to sit down and write a 10 page chapter.

I think your story is marvelous just the way it is!

if a vampire is changed at 5 yrs old... then they will forever look 5... that seems dumb. what a strange vampire story so far....

also, why can't a human be changed to a vampire if a halfling can??

I love the aunt!

So first a blood oath to be engaged, and then competitive courting. Sorry but just doesn't add uö together.