All Comments on 'Courting a Vampire Ch. 04'

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defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyover 12 years ago
damn...

Can't wait for more... I am usually more of a wolf girl but damn I like this story. Please continue...

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
This is getting addictive...very

For the love of all I'm such a greedy ass and need so much more of this story revealed. It's like a never ending rollercoaster with Lilly having the best and the worst odds. Hell who knew she shouldn't have been a Virgin? Oh I hope we see Chapter 5 like yesterday.

sirraliasirraliaover 12 years ago

I cant wait for the rest of Lilly's story. Love love love it.

dragonshadowbladedragonshadowbladeover 12 years ago

awesome!!!! hope to read more soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I love the story, however, I am disappointed with yet another writer on here that insists that the resistance of the hymen isn't felt til further inside the vagina. I would have thought that as a female you would know where the hymen is and if you didn't you would research it and find that is it at the entrance, not inside as you and many others seem to insist on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love It!!

I am really enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please try and make the chapters a little longer :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Divine

I'm completely hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter :P

jazz1190jazz1190over 12 years ago

I loving this story and I cant wait to read more. please can the next chapter be a little long cuz its getting to juicy to be 1 to 2 pages.

DmitryDmitryover 12 years ago
Gooooooodmorning!!!!

It is good, since I woke up to Chapter 4. Just as I had my heart rate going.....chapter ended. Thanks for 2 pages this time, I think most of your followers are thankful as well. You are really good at keeping us on the "short leash". It is a bit sadistic, but I thank you. See ya tomorrow???????

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Addictive

this has become a very addictive story in only four short chapters. Somehow you have managed to pack alot into your story already which means you are doing a great job. Please don't let others dictate the pace of your story. Just give us what feels right and the rest can wait.

I look forward to watching Lily get her Vampire!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
looooove it!!!

Dis stry is great nd i truely appreciate ur regular updates i just cnt stp reading dis

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
keep up the good work

best chapter yet though bit of an odd place to finish.

Also was a little confused by desmond being a girl as it's a boy's name and curious to know why you chose it. thanks.

oh and breathtakingly is one word.

daftjanedaftjaneover 12 years ago
keep going please

I love it.

amienicholeamienicholeover 12 years ago
I Just Love...

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I also appricate the fact that it was longer. I like so many were way to evolved until the end. I was really not wanting this chapter to end. Lol. Way to go again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lol another "WOW" XDD

I love it!! Soo much! You really should think about publishing this story! Its really good and interesting to read unlike the other stories here who only revolves in sex XDD

I really like the way you write..and i wish to read more of your work <3

MedgemonMedgemonover 12 years ago
love it

Im addicted need more

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 12 years ago
Good

for the human, hint, hint :>)

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