by StormHerald
Can't wait for more... I am usually more of a wolf girl but damn I like this story. Please continue...
For the love of all I'm such a greedy ass and need so much more of this story revealed. It's like a never ending rollercoaster with Lilly having the best and the worst odds. Hell who knew she shouldn't have been a Virgin? Oh I hope we see Chapter 5 like yesterday.
I love the story, however, I am disappointed with yet another writer on here that insists that the resistance of the hymen isn't felt til further inside the vagina. I would have thought that as a female you would know where the hymen is and if you didn't you would research it and find that is it at the entrance, not inside as you and many others seem to insist on.
I am really enjoying the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Please, please try and make the chapters a little longer :)
I loving this story and I cant wait to read more. please can the next chapter be a little long cuz its getting to juicy to be 1 to 2 pages.
It is good, since I woke up to Chapter 4. Just as I had my heart rate going.....chapter ended. Thanks for 2 pages this time, I think most of your followers are thankful as well. You are really good at keeping us on the "short leash". It is a bit sadistic, but I thank you. See ya tomorrow???????
this has become a very addictive story in only four short chapters. Somehow you have managed to pack alot into your story already which means you are doing a great job. Please don't let others dictate the pace of your story. Just give us what feels right and the rest can wait.
I look forward to watching Lily get her Vampire!!!
Dis stry is great nd i truely appreciate ur regular updates i just cnt stp reading dis
best chapter yet though bit of an odd place to finish.
Also was a little confused by desmond being a girl as it's a boy's name and curious to know why you chose it. thanks.
oh and breathtakingly is one word.
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I also appricate the fact that it was longer. I like so many were way to evolved until the end. I was really not wanting this chapter to end. Lol. Way to go again!
I love it!! Soo much! You really should think about publishing this story! Its really good and interesting to read unlike the other stories here who only revolves in sex XDD
I really like the way you write..and i wish to read more of your work <3