All Comments on 'Courting a Vampire Ch. 10'

More please!:) keep on going!:) loveeet!!!!

Please I know I've written that Damien is an ass but everything put into light ....please after all Lilly has been through give her what she wants and needs.... Damien.

Daimen doesn't deserve her she should be with one of the werewolves. She should leave after the werewolves heal her .

Enjoyed the story. I know theres one more chapter but I dont feel like reading how Lilly ends up with Damiens weak ass. Lol. All in all loved your writing. Hope you keep writing.

too short!!!!!!!!!!!

I am so glad the Desmond got what was coming to her my only wish is that the chapter had been a bit longer and just a bit slower in pace all in all it was an exciting chapter cannot wait for the next one

This chapter hasnt even been posted in the nonhuman under New.. if it wasnt for the comments to the right of what stories are available i wouldnt have known lit had released it .. ok i guess i better read it .. back soon :)

hahaha i just added you to favs this is the best chapter yet! ..

I feel justified now in all my defenses and it is good to be right

One has to love it when the plans of others come crashing down all around them..It one of the things that just warms my black heart with joy.

StormHerald well gone once once more.

Respectfully,

~Hellkite

Love the lions, love the plot twists, love the vamps(even the evil ones), so sad there is only one chapter left. Thank you for this fun story.

how do u know there is only one chapter left?

StormHerald has said in chapter nine comments that there were only 2 chapters left.. Only one now..so sad...want more.

You have created a likable female character and successfully salvaged an unlikable male character. I've really enjoyed this story.

My heart pounded loudly in the serene stillness of the dark early hours of the new day! There is no sweeter taste- outside of uninhibited passion- than revenge served so perfectly to a manipulative, conniving & insipid whore!

Love your vivid imagination & descriptive writing! While I can barely wait for the last chapter, I am sad it will be the finale. Hopefully, after you have read all the positively glowing comments, you will be inspired to share with all of us another amazing tale!!!

K.Veracious

Just when it was getting good you give us another cliffhanger!

Who gave her the silver powder?

Will Desmonds death end the courtship and begin a proper investigation into the murders years ago?

U have TALENT. In 1 shrt stry u have manipulated my emotions n sooo many directions. Damien went from a well hated liar 2 a total forgivable nd innocent character all n 1 revelation. U involved twist nd turns dat will send ur mind into overload. Da protaganist kept her ability 2 be a strong nd intelligent women who faltered very little throughout da stry. I have a feeling dis last chapter will continue on wit da duty of wrapping up da stry wit da same grace nd excitement as da rest.

PS. Plzz rite another stry u r an awsome writer nd ur skill shld b shared wit more than 1 stry.

dnt wanna dictate ur stry or nothing bt noooo dnt give lilly 2 damien. i dnt care if he was under da wrong influence, after what she's been through da lycan shld gt da gurl dey actually seem 2 care nd dnt give a fuck dat she's human. Bt i have a feeling were dis is goin 2 go. Ur stry is wonderful i bet dis last chapter will b great.

Why are you torturing us!?!

Loving this story! Can't wait to see how this turns out

Why do u choose the cliff hangers? I'm about ready to eat my hand in anticipation! But I give u credit. U push out stories everyday thank God. Not 1 every 5 months.

Now bring on tomorrow's chapter!

i love ur story!!!! more pls!!! im addicted! ur my drug!!!!

What an awesome way to kill that bitch! Keep 'em coming!

I am sooooo addicted to this story! Your plot twists are amazing and damn is Lily a fighter! Damien could learn a thing or two :) Keep going, please!!! I cannot wait for more!

Are you really going to make us wait until tomorrow?! Your so cruel!!!

you continue to pack each chapter w/so much stuff. You explained Damien's behavior, while at the same time explaining Desmond's power. And that Lily was left near death and able to get to her silver was perfectly played. What happens next? There is still the problem of who killed Damien's patents? Was it Lily? I personally think not.

I'm eager for the next chapter!

for letting the underdog heroin come out on top of this one! Can't wait for another installment...is it here yet???!!!!!

so deliciously cruel of u to leave us hanging, can just imagine you gleefully grinning with the occasional evil cackle after this cliffhanger! To another swift (hopefully) instalment of your masterpiece

11 hours till I can read the next one oh my god this is killing me I know you said this story is done but I hope you have plans to write others your an amazing writer

That was amazing.

Although, her later behavior seems to make a lie of her earlier statements about humans not being able to ignore pain for pride. Some could, and she's able to do it for another emotion.

Good that bitch deserved to die for screwing around with our Lilly.

...are the chapters so short?? Can we please have more than 1 or 2 pages in the next one? It's gone from being suspenseful to annoying!

more more more

i still think you are setting us up for one hell of a twist, and i cannot wait until it happens

CHAPTERS THEY ANIN'T DOING NOTHING BUT PISSING ME OFF(LOL)

Love this story, you've managed to put a unique spin on the vampire stories of which there are so many on this site!

You're producing the chapters so quickly that I don't think anyone can reasonably ask that they be longer- I love it just as they are!

Really look forward to reading more

love the story,more plzzzz..

Silver. How to tell you to kiss my ass and shock the shit out of someone while doing it :)

love the story and characters! nice storytelling ignoring the non editing errors.

Love it! I can't believe you are updating so quickly! I am truly addicted now. . .Checking back for more all the time! Love love love!

'Kiss of Death' has a whole new meaning for me now ;)

You were writing a very catching story but then when you reached the beginning of the middle you up and quit and move on , from the looks of it it seems you know how to start things can seem to understand there a process you must go through before you reach the ending. It still unclear if she killed his parents and why , the lycans, why everyone accepting her back, her mother, her brother, the fate of them. It was supoose to be 6 months but turned into more like a month and a half if that. You need to learn to follow through on your writing and I hope you take this advice into consideration and dont mess up the pride of a slave that also has a great beginning that just waiting for the middle to start!

with the beginning of the story being mixed into the middle, now we need an awesome conclusion to seal it with!

How come Damian was being restrained if he supported Desmonds action due to the bite and why did the council member suggest that the trial shouldn't gp ahead because the Prince wasn't there if he was ??? Maybe its me ....I'll reread lol

Fuck vampires are sickos.