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All Comments on 'Crazy Ride in the Rain'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A bit of whimsy, but needs a LOT of proofreading/editing

Fun, but so many spelling errors and more. scent not sent, reins not reigns, turned not tearned, crevices. Get someone to go over this for you and it will be much more readable.

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