All Comments on 'Cries of Love'

? i dont know what to say to this.?

Touching and although brief very thorough lived it only noticed that kaleb never says he was faithful during their separation

sweet but short and with so much unsaid. But you really need to read your stories again to catch all the wrongly used words and a few typos. Here are the ones I spotted:

far away for the forests (should be from the forests)

destory my self esteem (destroy my self-esteem)

each room his personalized (each room is)

made it hard for me to breath, I couldn't breath (breathe - a common mistake)

had my hair laying flat (lying flat - another common mistake)

I was older then human time (than human)

started to sent mark me (scent mark - as you've written two lines further down)

I couldn't find the worlds to describe (the words to)

As we lied on his bed (as we lay - unless you are telling lies;-)

to find your should mate (soul mate - that one was the worst of them)