All Comments on 'Crime: Bimbomania! Ch. 04'

I'm calling NBC right now, to try to get this show on the air. The story just flows right. I can't really explain it. Looking forward to more.

That line just struck me as possibly the least believable part of the story so far. Which probably says something about the stories I read and how long I can suspend my disbelief. I mean I've read plenty of stories where men and women are turned into bimbos through either science or magic, but these girls are being turned into sex toys, two of them are now nymphomaniacs, and the producers are worried about language? This kind of show is something that, at the very least, would only be shown late at night on channels that wouldn't come with the standard package, if not strictly PPV. Pretty much everyone who would watch this is old enough to swear. Any kids watching doing so without their parent's permission.

That being said, it's a good story so far, though there are a few typos, and I apologize if I came off a bit strong on the idea of this being a family show.

That was a joke. Calm down.

I have enjoyed all your stories and recently re-read the "Crime: Bimbomania" series. I noticed in Crime:bimbo mania chapter 4 you mentioned "Jeffrey" as a supervisor who screwed up and was disciplined by having large breast modification for a few weeks.

I was curious if you had ever considered exploring or developing this character further. Your bimbo mind control stories and universe are well developed so having the companies such as Blonde Concepts investigate whether or not to branch out into male bimbos may be interesting.

What If Jeffrey starts making more mistakes and receives more modifications?

What happens to him socially? privately? with his wife or girlfriend?

How would the female bimbos react to him?

This could extend your stories by branching out into the TG/CD genre, reaching more fans.

The company already produces female bimbos for male customers, but might start wanting to produce male bimbos for female customers who want dominance and servitude, but not strictly lesbianism in their relationships.

Anyway, thanks for all the wonderfully entertaining stories.

Thanks for the message about Bimbomania, BJ! I appreciate the kind words.

My problem with delving into TG material when writing has always been that my stories were written for the EMCSA (MCstories dot com, where all my work is posted under my Chrystal Wynd and Dark Wynd writing names). Simon doesn't allow TG material on the site, so I've never been able to develop those stories along those lines. I was surprised when he let me get away with Jeff's punishment, in fact.

I've got a TG novel (over 50k words so far) almost ready to go, though. It'll be posted on Amazon and Smashwords. Also, I'm going to be putting stories together just for Literotica now as well, so I expect there will be TG material working it's way (finally) into Chrystal Heights.

Thanks again for the message.

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