All Comments on 'Cross Country Ch. 06'

awesome, the whole story line is just awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I'm excited if we see Sebastian and his mother in action. That would be superb.

Got to say that I don't like Anne's addition, sorta takes the story away a bit. A nice bit of anal would be good though!

Greatly looking forward to upcoming chapters, hope you haven't given up!

this was amazing, i love how the story actually builds up into something! 10* definitely

Amazing story so far. What a wonderful build up that really paid off. I hope you plan to write more, as I would love to hear the rest of their story.

Very nice story. Please continue. Hope to read your announced Chapter 7 soon.

You could'nt just live us with this situation and ending in this memorable fourthsome !

They are not at all arrived in PERTH, and one must imagine there are other encounters coming up: just tell us what's coming up !!

Hurry up

You are one of the bests writers for this type of story, not oblivious of describing not only the scenes, and the action, but also the surrounding events, the scents and aromas linked to sex. Many thanks

No new post of this story since 2010! Does that mean that there will be no more!?

Truly enjoyable!

Thanks for an exciting story. I love the details, descriptions,etc. What a disservice not to add new chapters. There are so many direction to go. Please continue!!!!!!!

Excellent reading keep the stories coming .

To be continued, eh? Guess not :P

No, but, you wrote a nice series here. Sadly, it seems you've have lost interrest and we don't get a proper ending.

Enjoyed your story! please don't stop here story was well thought out.I like that you're not one of those that have a fixation on large grotesque breasts.

Ya I hate when authors give up on a story. It is like dating a virgin. They get you all hot and bothered and then say good night and you never hear from them ever again. Then they tell their friends it was the best date they ever had while you are left to go home and take matters in hand and still feel cheated!

Just so that you guys know, the writer of this series Vince, met with a terrible car crash and died on the spot. Hard to believe, but i know him personally as we kept in touch. His real sister had down syndrome and her name was anne.

Why does every female in Lit stories seem to have some sort of squirting orgasm. I have had sex with real squirters, and please understand this one thing. It is pee. It is not some magical girl juice which tastes like vaginal honey. In fact it shoots out of the urethra. It smells like urine, it tastes like urine (not yummy at all) and it will burn your eyes like urine. It also destroys a mattress like urine. I know some females get very lubricated, and ooze copious amounts, but that is a whole other fluid. I have never seen one squirt vaginal fluids. Just pee, and it is not as awesome without preparation as you would think. Please stop making females shoot magical girl juice.

I really enjoyed this story. Good work man! I'm gunna check and see if you have any other stories and if you do I'll check a couple out. 5/5

two sister and brother was good but no the super hero brother need another pussy . i know one of the sister suggest it . but hey its the writers fantasy he need more pussy. why dont u bring another cock for the sisters . i know u will not going to do that .

Thought this was going to be about Sasha and seb not older sister or anyone else. Why can't we get just a love story between to siblings and no one else maybe parents. Right turn off.

I desperately crave more of this story. I stayed up all night reading it from start til now and I think I ended up wetter than Nicky honestly. More please 5/5!!!!!

Absolutely love this story and hope you will write some more very soon. We have the whole Nullarbor to get across yet and who knows maybe some sleep outs in the same camps the Grey Nomads are using. Lot's of fun yet even Mum could get some lovin'

Well done from a fellow Aussie.

Please finish.

.. has too many arms & legs, but four has *way* too many arms and legs! you need five so someone can direct at that point.

This was a good theme, especially as road trips have a definite end and a limited main cast. Moreso driving across central Oz where all you can really do is character development.

You lost me, 3 was stretching it. Ending it with 4 was messy and just unsatisfying.

Excellent writing, and story. Really enjoyed it and hope that you continue at some point.

It started of nicely, first 3 chapters all 5*.

Then it became clear that Sasha has been manipulating a lot, 4* ... 3*

And now the almost raping of Anne: 2*. And since the story isn't finished 1*.

Sasha is a bitch, and apparently Seb isn't much better.

Been reading stories for about a year and a half now. I can honestly say that this Cross County series is exactly what I was looking for.

Kudos to author VentureV job well done