All Comments on 'Crossing Moon Ch. 15'

Im so glad that your back writing again. Keep them coming hope your editor is quick about it lol.

I am thrilled to see you posting a new chapter. I check nightly for an update to this story. I can't wait for the rest of the story. I love your writing.

I love the story and how it is heading. I love Carri and Samuel together, she is going through the same problem like her parents, but she will fall in love with him in the end. I think Alven should have his own story and another mate for him.

a happy ending. i still feel carri and alven belong together bc sam has bad intentions but mayb he'll save her idk but please dont keep us waiting too long

You writing is good I just finished this chapter and noticed there is no new chapter. WHY? You so need to finish this story. Also I think you need to maybe get another editor. The love between your people is beautiful and it needs to reflect that in the way it is put down and edited. I think Alven should maybe fall in love with one of the black wolf pack. I think maybe Sam should be killed and Carrie be given a chance to really fall in love with someone who's gonna love her back for her.

Good job!

Please make it a good ending and I am disappointed at your lack of A next chapter!!!!!! Please hurry hurry hurry!!

omg...omg...omg... i can't wait to read what happens next!! please finish the next chapter ASAP!!

i love this story please add more

Please don't. I'm so enthralled at this point that I check twice a week for an update. I've reread it now as well. You have such a good plot going!

You are awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I check so frequently and I can't help but feel sad that there's not a next chapter! You need to finish this! Please xxx

this is a great story please submit more chapters ASAP

Please Continue Avvie and Max's Story it's One of My Favourites. It's Such! A Good Story :]

my biggest pet peeve - Is authors that tease - write a few chapters and get people hooked and then never finish - I so hate an unfinished story - shame on you for doing this to readers. People should at least delete stories they have no intention of finishing.

How could you do this!!! How did you let Carie mate with Samuel!!!! She should have mated with Alven!!! They were meant to be together!!!! How could you!!!!

I hate you for this!!!!

I hope you do something to make Carrie and Alven get together!!

Something like the pack discovers that samuel is a traitor and kills him or that while they are at war he gets killed so that Carrie ends up mating with Alven.

The needs of school, work and family/friends do impose time restrictions on us all but I know that no matter which school you are currently attending that a 2 week break as already come and gone. August to January... really? The dramatic flair is fine as long as it does not go on so long that it turns your supporters into indifferent masses. I do hope that you return soon otherwise you are working your audience into lather over nothing. Best wishes:)

~~Sarabell

The storyline itself is epic and even though you may be taking a break I do hope you return with the last fabulous instalment as soon as you can! :)

please continue the story..... you can't lease it the way it is. please finish it . what happens with Evvy and Max will they complete their bond and what of her brother Alvan. i think he finally figured out he is in love with Carrie. now he shit out of luck she finished her mating with Sam, even though she loves Alvan. please continue writing or at least write a sequel

loved all ur stories so far but i really hope that Carie will end up mated with Alven and not Samuel. Hope u will write the next ones ASAP PLEASE

u going to finish ?

FINISH PLEASE! I'm like dying over here!!!

Please finish out your Crossing Moon story....it is truly an outstanding story and I would love to see how it ends!!! Please, please, please finish it!! Thank you so much!!!

Days Trying to Find This Story and I Shouldnt Have Bothered. If Your not Going to Finish The Story Dont Bother Writing them!

I'm so sad that I check very frequently as to wether you have updated but I'm getting disheartened now! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!

When are you coming back?

Please come back. I need to know if everyone mates with who theyre supposed to be with. Please please please continue writing or at least tell us the reason of your absence. This story has made itself a special place in my heart. Please continue.

the story, please let me know so I can take you off my list of authors to check and make room for some one else. I have been checking every few days for months and the story is still left unfinished. thanks mikothebaby@yahoo.com

when will capter 16 be up can you tall me it will be up soon we all need to no what happen's can you post the next capter soon thank you.... howl you later

if you are still interested in crossing moon you can find the author in facebook

Hey guys I got an email from jayleen she's on facebook under Jayleen Krista Jazleen she says she will post stories there and that she has found a really good website to post the rest of her stories if any 1 is interested contact her on facebook she didn't tell me what the website was called so check it out. Chz.Alex

wood you find out the website for all us fans some of us do not have acses to facebook... ps, thank's.

http://www.booksie.com/jayleen_lee

Plzzzzz continue I live ur stories I can't find where u published the other ones plz I really want to see the ending plzzzzzzzzz I really do love ur stories

Now I have to wait for the next chapters...Please Please continue LOL

This is such a wonderful story. I really hope you plan on finishing it at some point. It would be a shame to just leave it off here!!!

are you planning to finish this story anytime soon?

I have loved all your stories, but I feel that "Crossing Moon" is too drawn out, it has lost the feel of your other stories, to me. It feels like it was written because everyone felt you should continue the narrative, rather than because you really wanted to continue to grow the characters and their involvement. Sorry, but this is the way I feel. I hope you will soon start a new novel with new characters and story-line.

Thanks for great story telling,

i used to follow this story like 7 months ago. and i think there was a post saying that she stopped writing here and continued the story on another website. i dont know what that website is, i forget, but i think shes continueing it on there

Please finish this story or post where you have sent it...such as another website. I am loving it and really want to finish reading it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Here is the link to read up to chapter 19 of Crossing Moon.

http://www.booksie.com/Jayleen_Lee

Please finish this story cant wait for the next chapter

why do I always have to read a story with no ending? please come back and complete this tale. please and thank you.

I'm absolutely loving this, are you going to finish it? I so want to know what will happen next!

Why'd you stop? I love your stories!

I have finish this chapter but no updates on the new ones. The story haven't end and I'm sad that your last update was on 2010......... looking forward to hope that u will have updates here if you do see my comment here.

This is Amazing by far and you should definitely publish it! Please please please give us pt 16!!!!!