All Comments on 'Cruise'

Hope your write more.

Good debut, even though the double-ended fuck is formulaic by now. And no obvious quibbles! Good writing. Now turn out the watch below! More!

This could be a great series. Plz carry on with this story.

This is a great start - she has them under her control so the trick will be for them to turn the tables. Up the ante in the next chapter by introducing some risk and see who cracks first. Spiro and Rob should bring some other guys to see how much she likes being triple fucked or more. That might wipe the smile off her face and they have nothing to lose.

Enjoyed your(?) story, please continue writing you have talent.

I can't believe that it has changed that much over time. As a former marine engineer it was well known that crews and passenger don't mix. The insurance companies would not allow it in 1961, I can't see the damage of a suing passenger to be less then as to day as it is at present.

I should know I married a passenger in 1962, you know her as Janice I am her sub husband.