by CallMePeePee
This was a very good first chapter and I am looking forward to Ch 2.
Mystified by gender biased erotic contributions, we concluded this writer is either a miniscule male, underexperienced or maybe an inhibited erotic homophobic? -Sensually satisfying written submissions can be intensified or enhanced by secretive homosexual activities! Noting the writer's all-female encounters, weren't there any that involved homosexual urges to balance out his sex life? Surely wimps like himself wonder about female sensations, firstly, whilst being anally penetrated, thereafter sensing hot sperm ejaculating deep within their upper colon region? In other words; Get yourself a well-hung paid Black man! Hopefully questionable enigmas will be clarified, producing future 'well rounded' contributions, from an otherwise talented Literotica writer. With a generous sized cock up your asshole, your own penis might recover the ability to make your wife multi-orgasmic, without betraying secret desires to suck off one [unemployed] African-American manservant in public? It makes good economic sense!
Quit writing - it is a complete waste of everyone's time.
Don't listen to the negative comments on here, please keep writing there are a lot of us that did enjoy this story, I'll be waiting for part 2.
5/5
The story is hot. Nothing wrong with any of this, as long as the tiny dicked guy doesn't end up humiliated. Watching the wife get fucked by a big dicked stud is great, as long as they keep loving you.
I too hope that the story does not turn into one of these humilaition things where the man is belittled. There is nothing wrong and everything right with watching your wife with another man as long as there is love and respect involved. Seeing the one you love being taken by a man who is exceptionally well-endowed, and even helping out and joining in, is a great experience.
i for one loved this story and hope you continue with it! the love between a Dominant Hotwife and Her submissive, obedient cuckold is a beautiful thing indeed! i eagerly await your next chapter! Thanks
What normal man would take that road?? If the slut is unsatisfied then divorce her and she can get on with her life!! No human should be treated like you describe! And if a spouse requires such a behavior than dump him/her!!! But if you are one of that perverted brain sick fans of that author, then you need mental help!!!